Incredibly moving. There is a sense of lethargic urgency in this one, that feeling of “I have to move” being trapped under “I cannot move.” The line that sticks out most, and perhaps from my reading the underpinnings of the poem is where you wrestle with writing her death while she’s alive, like a vision from before the grave. This is excellent.
Incredibly moving. There is a sense of lethargic urgency in this one, that feeling of “I have to move” being trapped under “I cannot move.” The line that sticks out most, and perhaps from my reading the underpinnings of the poem is where you wrestle with writing her death while she’s alive, like a vision from before the grave. This is excellent.
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